EddyPaintings's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mr.Beast's UNFAIR Challenge]

Peter griffin

Potatoman responds:

stew

[Whitey dies lol]

Little rough, more of animatic than a animation, slap some decent inbetweens in, would be a pretty good short animation

QELINDENT responds:

totally agree however like it was said in the description, this is a quickly made one for a collab that had a 24h deadline, i wish i spent more time on it however lol

[cartoon dog]

Please make sure you post more finished work, or if it's a animatic, make sure to still add some more frames and visual interest.

Connytoons responds:

Ok, I will consider doing that

[My worst nightmares - New version]

Cool concept, but needs to be fleshed out more. I understand using alot of stills on this animation, but it would of been improved with more visual interested during these stills, but draw two of the same pose and flip between? perhaps a flicking light in the background highlighting different part of the frog? Could do with more dets in the background as well, and smoother/fluid tranistions between shots (felt a little jaggered and forced) But overally, decently made, cool frog design and cool concept of a corrupted frog.

KimMaryArt responds:

Thank you very much for your comment, I will take into account the points you mentioned to improve in future videos, thank you very much

[MBY Short: Mario sues]

Might need to fix that animation bud

My-Blue-Yoshi responds:

I tried